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Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. In its original (and unique) form, it presents her irregular capitalizations and dashes:

A Door just opened on a street —

I — lost — was passing by —

An instant's Width of Warmth disclosed —

And Wealth — and Company.

The Door as sudden shut — And I —

I — lost — was passing by —

Lost doubly — but by contrast — most —

Informing — Misery.

We may note that many, though by no means all of the nouns are capitalized. Moreover, she gave us fifteen dashes in her eight-line poem!

Perhaps more significant is the final adjective. Every source I checked indicated "informing" misery, although I strongly prefer your "enlightening"!

Again, gratitude. This poem is amazingly relevant at this point in our history.

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Thank you Lenny. Yes I thought it very relevant to now.

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