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Debbie Silver's avatar

Your words were always impactful! These are just beautiful!๐Ÿ’•

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DocTalk, Allan N Schwartz PhD's avatar

OMG, Debbie, thank you and I love you.

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Debbie Silver's avatar

๐Ÿฅฐ

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Ian Haycroft's avatar

Ahhhh Allan. Thank you. Your poetry is beautiful...a tender wander in the hallways of aging with such honest eyes. Thank you mate.

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DocTalk, Allan N Schwartz PhD's avatar

Ian thank you so much. Ordering technology is very strange. I meet people and I find that I like some of them very much. You are one of them. Yet youโ€™re so far in terms of geography. With technology, we gain certain things. We get to verbally interact with people but from a very great distance. What we miss out on is what is most important about relationships. These relationships while important are not face-to-face. We miss out on tones of voice and nonverbal communication of all types. Ian, I value your friendship, a great deal and yet we have never met. My instincts tell me that we would make great friends. Ian, letโ€™s keep in touch and letโ€™s be as much as possible good friends to each other.

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Monica P.'s avatar

Allan, your poetry is so heartfelt and the music you chose so soothing and beautiful. Getting old is hard. Sometimes it seems that the only places I go are to doctor appointments or to the grocery store. Nature is my saving grace along with walking with my neighbor and her dog almost every evening. May you find peace and many smiles to share.

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DocTalk, Allan N Schwartz PhD's avatar

That is a great compliment and thank you

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Monica P.'s avatar

You are so welcome.

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DocTalk, Allan N Schwartz PhD's avatar

I relate to your comment very deeply. I also experience being old as a very difficult. I have my aches and pains, and I have problems with my balance when Iโ€™m standing for Walking. This is not easy and yet itโ€™s important that we keep on and that we donโ€™t give up the struggle.

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Marjorie Wolton-Maxted's avatar

Allan I am so moved by your poems. You are a poet, with such expressive feeling. I try to write verse/poetry, mostly narrative which gives me pleasure and frustration. Sometimes it is in rhyming couplets, 'Oh not another rhyming poem mum!' My brain enjoys the challenge, Doubtless they will all be gratefully thrown away when I am gone! By which time hopefully my aches and pains will all have gone too! Cherry's friend Marjorie. How is Cherry, is she to in Independent living? I have not had any emails from her in a long time.

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DocTalk, Allan N Schwartz PhD's avatar

No she is in skilled care memory unit. Its very sad. Marjorie I did not know we have this personal connection. Please let's stay in touch. My email is. dransphd@gmail.com and my iPhone is 720-470-2028

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Suzanne Alvine's avatar

Beautiful poems Allen. Very poignant and relatable. Sue

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DocTalk, Allan N Schwartz PhD's avatar

Suzanne, thank you. That means a lot to me.

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Shane DeRolf's avatar

Hi Allanโ€”-I love your poems and really enjoyed reading them! Thanks for sharing. May today smile widely for you!โ€”-Shane

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DocTalk, Allan N Schwartz PhD's avatar

Shane, thank you so much and I hope you are well.

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DocTalk, Allan N Schwartz PhD's avatar

Hi Marjorie, I'm afraid that Cherry is in very bad condition. She is deep into dementia and does not respond. She is in the memory care unit of an assisted living facility. Life can be so cruel. I do not worry about or care about whether what I write goes into the trash and is forgotten. When you and I are gone it will make no difference to us. Marjorie, just enjoy writing, that is all that matters.

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Pamela Leavey's avatar

Allan, These two poems are beautiful. Sending warm thoughts and hugs your way.

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